It all started when I lily was walking down the street. I was by a sewer pipe and I heard something I was looking behind me I saw a dog that was getting water splashed on him and he was sick so I took him home and gave him medicine and food put him by the fire to get warm. Soon he was warm and healthy and definitely part of the family we were for sure a good dog family we named him spike and we loved her and we all lived happily ever after the end.
P.s good luck homeless puppies.
by Vicky
This is a lovely story, Vicky!
I am happy that you did look behind you at the right moment.
Keep up the great work!
Kind regards,
Diethild
Vicky,
Writing is my favorite hobby. I am so glad that you enjoy it too. I love your story about helping a dog. You have such a good heart. Keep up the great work!
Love,
Mom
Your P.S. is such a great part of your story…it connects with the reader and makes us think back to your story problem. Good work!
This is such a neat story idea.
I really liked this post! It was very creative. I loved your use of words. Good job overall.
I like your story! Very imaginative!
This is so you! I can definitely hear your voice in this story. That is a goal of good stories. Nice job.