the turtle

The Turtle

There was a turtle that thought he was funny.  The other turtles didn’t think he was funny. On Saturday at he told a joke.  Everybody yelled at him and called him names. He was sad. He ran into the forest to cry. He noticed a bright orange magical fruit. He went over to it. It looked so juicy he couldn’t resist. He took a bite. He went back to the playground, told a joke and it was very funny. All the other turtles laughed and cheered him on. The turtle was happy. The other turtles followed him to the pavement and waved goodbye.

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1 Response to the turtle

  1. Ms O'Keeffe (team 100wc) says:

    Hi Isabelle
    This is a great 100 word challenge and such a good use of all the words of the prompt. I love how you have given your story a magical element with the turtle eating the orange fruit which he couldn’t resist and then having all the others think that he was funny. This is very clever and creative of you and a lovely twist to the story. I really enjoyed reading your work and I look forward to reading more during the year. Well done.
    Ms O’Keeffe (Team 100wc)

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