Category Archives: Elementary

One day, the funny turtle asked the orange chipmunk to race across a desert and a pond. So they raced. And raced. Across a desert and slept at an awasis. The next day they raced and raced until night. They … Continue reading →

This is an organized first draft.  What suggestions do you have for next steps? Goku and Kid buu. and the Turtle was walking around Goku and Kid buu were fighting Goku grabbed the Turtle the Turtle was orange  bit Goku … Continue reading →

This is a first draft.  What should be next to work on? The orange boy went to the pet store to buy a turtle and we r gunna walk on .the sidewalk and we got home and I mad the … Continue reading →

This is a first draft.  What suggestions do you have for revisions? Goku and raddix were fighting and a turtle walked by them and Goku defeated Raddix and Goku threw the Turtle and the Turtle turned in to a ninja … Continue reading →

There was a train the train driver is a nectarine and they went to a tunnel it is a long tunnel and they came out in a 1000s of years everybody was dead because they never had food or water … Continue reading →

The chocolate world I was waiting for the new chocolate shop. I begged my mom if I could have some money for chocolate. She loaned me ten dollars. On my way I met my friends. When we got there looking … Continue reading →

One day a little girl name Kate. She found a key in a grass. She said” what does this key go to?” She went to her backward and started playing a game with it. Her best friend Bella came over. … Continue reading →

Camels are the best because they are faster and smarter than horses. They can store lots of water. They are good for a desert caravan. They eat lots of green food. When frost comes they will eat anything. Camels can … Continue reading →