The park is in New York City. The children are playing. There are people riding horses. There are cherry blossoms on the trees. Flowers are blooming.
We like your story! It will be better when you have longer sentences that describe the picture. The word ‘blooming’ is a great power word. Happy Writing!
Mrs. Stading’s Reading Class
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