The Mysterious picnic bag

On a blistering summer day in Alaska I was going on a picnic and I saw that my dog had vanished. Then I saw a gloomy bag it was like something was alive.

I took a step closer to it and it moved again. But this time it fell over, it rolled all of the way down the hill then I stumbled to it. It jumped up then fell.

The bag looked like a picnic basket. It miraculously opened then something was wrapped in picnic blanket that rolled over to my feet. I unwrapped it and it was my dog!!

by Zachary

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