Once there were two men hiking up to the Russian falls to look for Salmon. One of the men was me and I am the narrator of this story. I do not come in a lot in this story. The other person is my dad. On our way there was a sound and it sounded like a chocolate rabbit. (They can talk in this story) and it sounded like it was coming from the falls. Did I mention it was very sunny today? Bye the time we got there “hoorays please eat me so I do not melt down but… the chocolate rabbit melted in the sun.
by Junior
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This week’s 100 Word Challenge Prompt:
…the chocolate rabbit melted in the sun…
Great story Junior! I really like the setting. Is this a real setting near where you live? It is such a shame that in your story, you and your Dad didn’t quite get to the rabbit in time. I also like how you managed to use brackets and a question mark.
Well done and keep up the good work.
Mrs Prior (Team 100WC)
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