On one hot spring day a boy named Johnny has a beautiful chocolate bunny. Johnny named his bunny Alisa. While Johnny was swimming in his huge swimming pool, Alisa was standing in the hot cool air. “Please Johnny please save me”. I guess today is the day when THE CHOCOLATE BUNNY MELTS IN THE SUN. Goodbye Johnny. 2 minutes later Johnny went to the fabulous chocolate bunny and (screamed) louder than 999,999 bears roaring! TO BE CONTINUED. Johnny’s gorges mother came outside and said “Watts wrong honey.” My melted chocolate bunny is melted. “Well let’s put it in the freezer”. OK mommy.
by Kirianna
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This week’s 100 Word Challenge Prompt:
…the chocolate rabbit melted in the sun…
Hi Kirianna, there are some really nice ideas in your 100wc entry, I especially like the idea of yelling that loud. I think I understand the order of events in the story but maybe you could clarify who is calling out for help.
Oh sorry about that the chocolate bunny is yelling out help. Did you know that I want to be a writer wen I grow up.