The week before Easter day there was two children a little girl and a little boy named Sara and Eric.
They were so exited for Easter and the day came well the day before and they went to bed at 8:35 even though their bed time was at 9:00 and they woke up because it was so loud so they looked out the window and they saw the Easter bunny with 2 chocolate bunnies. It was morning and it REALY sunny and THE CHOCLATE BUNNIES MELTED IN THE SUN!!!
They were so sad. But at least they fun that day and had some sweet yummy candy.
by Sarafima
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This week’s 100 Word Challenge Prompt:
…the chocolate rabbit melted in the sun…
Hello Sarafima!
It is so good to see your work on the 100WC. Well done for telling the story about Easter. It was obviously a very exciting time for the children. I’m wondering if you had any chocolate rabbits or eggs!!
Happy Easter Sarafima, well done for taking part in the 100WC. I am glad the children in your story still had fun even though the bunnies melted!
Next time remember to read through you work, you may have needed more punctuation than you used. Great use of capital letters to give emphasis to certain words.
Keep up the good work.