One day in 2020 in a zoo there was a scary underwater car in the seal tank. In 2019 a dumb couple was driving and not paying attention then they drove into the seal tank. Some people say that the couple is still in the seal tank and grew big fins and weird gills. The people called them the People of the Underwater car. Duntduntdun!
Two days ago some kids went swimming in the tank to get a close-up view. They never heard the legend of the Underwater Car. Then they knew at once they weren’t alone. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! No Duntduntduntdun! TO BE CONTINUED.
by Clara
You are so funny, Clara! I love how your interests find their way into your writing pieces, like myths and legends. I do want to know what happens to those poor swimmers. Great start!
Oh no…. always pay attention when you drive…. can’t wait to read what happens next!!
Clara I love this! You are so creative…I really want to know what happens next!
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