Once upon a time there was a turtle and a rabbit who were friends. The rabbit said do you want to race? No, said the turtle. Then they got angry at each other. And then they were not friends anymore. Then the turtle said fine let’s do a race on the pavement. Then they started the race. And then funny bunny came and waved and said hi. The rabbit in the race kept stopping at people’s houses to get something to drink because he thought the turtle was too slow. The turtle won the race and got the orange for a prize. Then they were friends again.
by Taitum
What a fun story! You have given the reader a very clear beginning, middle and end. I wonder if you can think of other story openings? When you read over your story, check for any things to add (or leave out), like “talking” (quotation) marks. The rabbit said, “Do you want to race?”
I enjoyed your story and pleased to read that they are friends again.
Well done – John C (100WC Team)
I love how you have rewritten a classic story- and have the imagination to do that from the prompt words that you were given. Well done- a great use of the prompt this week.
Fiona (Team 100WC)