Dear Night Zookeeper,
One day in Springfield our good zoo was there. A lot of trustworthy people were visiting when you, the Night Zookeeper, said it was time to get going so they left.
Then that very cold night a new car was driving with two people coming home from the store and then the really tired people feel asleep and the car crashed into the big zoo! They crashed into the lion’s river. Sadly the hungry lions ate the innocent people.
The wrecked car was in the deepest depth of the lion’s River. It was seriously twenty feet deep.
Sincerely,
Justin
Dear Justin,
What can I say? Your 100wc is great! I love the idea that you have wrote it in a letter way that’s awesome. I also like how you have used (Sadly the hungry lions ate the innocent people). Next time instead of writing Justin you could write Your sincerely Justin. Why did you write about the crashed car?
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Great adjective use, Justin!