I was going to Hawaii for summer and planning for it. I bought airplane tickets a hotel room for me to stay in and bought clothes now what do I need. Oh ya I forgot to buy a map and a carrier for my dog. I went to the store and bought the carrier but couldn’t find the map. Well I guess I would get one from Hawaii. When summer started I headed to Hawaii but when I got there I decided to buy some sunblock. Then I went to get a map I looked all over Hawaii, no map and then I got lost.
Ha, that cracks me up that you couldn’t find a map in Hawaii.
Why didn’t you buy that map?
I really enjoyed the length of your story. It spans a longer distance which adds to the detail of your work. Consider next time adding in some adjectives to add more interest.
Cheers
Mr Skill (Team 100WC)
You will not be planning are Christmas trip to the Big Island! Great story, J!
I would love to get lost in Hawaii!
i would love to be in hawaii
Nicely written story, John for the 100wc. I like the twist at the end!
Ha! You could use Cassie’s IPhone: Google Maps!