Running is the best way to be a healthy person!!!
Running has simple ways to be healthy!
First of all you could lose some weight. Second, you will be in better shape. Third, you won’t be as heavy or fat or have flab.
Running has fantastic benefits!
One reason is you could do it on bright green grass or cold frosty sidewalks, in other words winter or summer. Another good reason is that if it was not easy, why would animals be in caravans that run?
While walking is easy, running can be more helpful!
by Elizabeth
Hello Elizabeth. This is a great piece of persuasive writing – you have succeeded in making me want to take up running. You used some great techniques such as the rule of 3.
The only thing I didn’t understand was the sentence: Another good reason is that if it was not easy, why would animals be in caravans that run?
Can you think of another way you could use the word ‘caravan’ that would make more sense?
i like that you want to be helfy